At our homeschool, we enjoy learning to write poetry. Last year, Elliot's poem Water Park was selected for publication in the spring edition of the Creative Commons A Celebration of Poets.
Water
Park
Jumped off a pirate ship
Cold liquid
Sharks swim around me
Scary water slide.
100 miles an hour
Having fun too!
Hot sun
A raft
For 3 of us
Like riding on a zooming
Alligator
The Squirrel Bridge
The electricity line that hangs
over Carolyn's back yard
is a squirrel bridge
He knows not to
jump
because he will die
Rain
Have you ever
Tasted rain
Straight from the sky?
Haiku
A pack of pea pods
the chopsticks strike with fury
the pea pod slips out
I write
I write poems like a car
at a hotel
in starts and
stops
but reaching
it's destination
A List
New
Moon
Cool
Clear
Night
Stars
Million
Freezing
Lillies
The Meaning of Life
I am nothing in life, but life.
Life is a trip to the world.
A trip of life and death
and beauty and gruesome
and heroical and evil.
Life is about having a good time
and having adventures
and work.
Life is an adventure.
Emily
Emily is my big sister.
She frightens me.
She plays with me
and sometimes eats with me
and sometimes does traditions with me too,
like Christmas
and Easter
but when she's not here
I am sad.
Lego Hobby
This started out as a Lego hobby.
As I play all day, my room gets messy.
I fear there is no hope,
but this started out as a Lego Hobby.
Play
I play all day
Swinging on the limits of play
On the highway of happiness.
Wink
When I think about winking
I try to wink
but instead
I blink.
Dash
You do not know my secret identity.
I dash through the night
with my friend Flash.
I dash with Flash
To save the day
from Monster Mash.
How Many Things to Worry About?
Maybe it will storm when I'm
done with school.
What will I see on Halloween?
What if Mom makes me do school
in the middle of a tornado?
Wow, these are terrific, Elliot! I love the images you paint with your words. I think my middle schoolers, and many adults, would not be able to write with the skill you do in crafting these beautiful images. Keep it up! I look forward to reading more!
ReplyDeleteGosh Elliot, what a lovely selection of poems you have there. They are very clever. I liked all of them, especially the one about Emily, your big sister! Keep up the good work. You are doing to well :)
ReplyDeleteI'm in awe of Elliot's talent for writing poetry. These are all great! Please keep writing and keep sharing with us! :)
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