Wednesday, March 23, 2011

Press the Moon Button

This character is named "Elliot"  He is surprised to find himself on the moon.
 Elliot finds that walking on the moon is difficult because of the bulky suit, the air tank, and the lack of "a lot of gravity".  He is surprised to discover that "there are no aliens, as usual."
When he returns home after a scary experience that involved a crack in his shield, he tells a reporter about his adventure.


This is a story about a boy who learns to ride a bike after years of practicing.  He ends up riding all the way to a city where he discovers a skyscraper.  Upon entering this tall building, he walks into an elevator.  In the elevator, there is a sign that says
"Press the Moon Button"
The rest of the story tells of what happens after the fateful moment when he presses the the button.

After Elliot started telling and writing this story, he kept thinking of things to add.  In then end, to my great surprise and delight, he ended up with well over 200 words.

3 comments:

  1. Well done to your little Elliott. He did a brilliant job! Over 200 words is quite an achievement for a young lad. I like the illustrations to go with the words!

    ReplyDelete
  2. That's a great story and I love the artwork. Children create true art.
    Here from the bloghop.
    I follow you on GFC. I'd love for you to follow me back
    Tiffany
    http://tiffspixiedust.blogspot.com
    Tiffypoot @ (aol.com)

    ReplyDelete
  3. These pictures are a treasure . . .

    ReplyDelete

Search This Blog

Banner and button design by me!